Thursday, July 23, 2009

Unfortunate Cookie


Do you think if I forgive this comma splice, my fortune will come true?

Don't be hasty, prosperity will knock on your door soon.

Prosperity, I am waiting!

4 comments:

kate said...

Mmm, I want a fortune cookie.

Kerry said...

Are comma spices the same as comma splices? The former sounds yummier. :)

Jeanine said...

I like to think my commas taste like cinnamon. Delicious!

Anonymous said...

To mend the splice, would an acceptable alternative be:

Don't be hasty, because prosperity will knock on your door soon.